My Michelle
A Book by RainDancer1997
 This story is about a girl named Michelle who is human girl birthed by vampires.  © 2013 RainDancer1997
Author's Note
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I hope you like my ideas and I accept anything you want to say about it:)
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Featured Review
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You've got a fairly strong plot developing within the story so far. I think your characters are nicely described and aspects of them can be seens as relatable in certain ways, which is good, as it allows readers to bond with one character or another.
I think the biggest thing to watch for... is your simple misspellings. The grammer over all is quite strong, so you should be fine on that point.
Keep up the good work!
Aaron
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Yea I ten to suck at grammar:p But I'm trying:) And thanks for reading:)!!!
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11 Years Ago
tend* sorry lol
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11 Years Ago
Trying is the best part, as it teaches us with every line. =)
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Your so talented!! Keep it up girilie :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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FRIGGIN LOVE THE IDEA!!! sorry i just love vampires and fantasy. I'm hooked and i haven't even read anything :DD
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
HAhaha I'm glad you like it:) lmao
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You've got a fairly strong plot developing within the story so far. I think your characters are nicely described and aspects of them can be seens as relatable in certain ways, which is good, as it allows readers to bond with one character or another.
I think the biggest thing to watch for... is your simple misspellings. The grammer over all is quite strong, so you should be fine on that point.
Keep up the good work!
Aaron
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Yea I ten to suck at grammar:p But I'm trying:) And thanks for reading:)!!!
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11 Years Ago
tend* sorry lol
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11 Years Ago
Trying is the best part, as it teaches us with every line. =)
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Will read later. Looks interesting though. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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You've got an interesting plot here. I'll be sure to work my way through the novel and give you my thoughts!
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Thanks a lot:)
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RainDancer1997ragland, AL
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I'm from a small town in Alabama and I love skateboards and any type of rock music. I love to talk to anyone, and I hope ya'll like my writings:)!
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