Regret

Regret

A Poem by Dodanis Brewer
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A month old Poem I did to release what I've been feeling during my childhood and years. By doing this I felt so much better and no longer hold these feelings. But I still hold the unfear of death.

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In such little body I live in, so much regret I hold. By the lost of my love ones, and the distance is so far cold. For so long I have lived it, the less hopes I get to survive. And even fear inside me, I have always now denied. I no longer fear death, no longer the depths of hell. Is this even normal, am I really feeling well? No longer darkness haunts me, it no longer feeds from my fears. By all the time have passed, now I know what I regret during these years. By the words that I spoke, to my father it was hate. I regret what I said to him, but I know its to late. By the chance of love I had, I no longer see him now. Only by that question he ask, I didn't express my feelings from up to down. By the decision to move on, from where I first lived. I lost someone I cared for, she was a child of love to give.... And by the most times I regret, during times of stress. I regretted my own beginning of life... It had ended in such a mess...

© 2013 Dodanis Brewer


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Dodanis Brewer
If you see any grammar problems, ignore, you may correct them but only in your own sight of mind.

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SEEMS A REFLECTION OF SELF...A VERSE ABOUT OVERCOMING YOUR FEARS AND LETTING GO OF THE PAST IN THE LINES OF THIS ONE...THOSE FEELINGS THAT HAVE BEEN HAUNTING YOU AND RELEASING THOSE INNER DEMONS IS A UPLIFT TO MOVING ON IN YOUR LIFE...

WE ALL HAVE THEM AND FOR YOU TO ACKNOWLEDGE THE FACTS OPENLY IS COURAGE...YOU SET YOURSELF FOR A CLEARER MINDSET...THAT'S THE GOAL IN LIFE TO UNDERSTAND AND MOVE ON THE PATH OF DISCOVERY...LET THE LOOSE ENDS FALL WHERE THEY BE...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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i like the poem! im usually not very good at finding the true meaning of them, but i like them none-the-less.

ps. if you drew the pic, great job! i love to draw! :3

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dodanis Brewer

11 Years Ago

Thank you c: And yes, I surely did drew the pic with my own fursona.
Darkdragon

11 Years Ago

AWESOME! i love wolves as you can see from my pic. .w. again great job!
SEEMS A REFLECTION OF SELF...A VERSE ABOUT OVERCOMING YOUR FEARS AND LETTING GO OF THE PAST IN THE LINES OF THIS ONE...THOSE FEELINGS THAT HAVE BEEN HAUNTING YOU AND RELEASING THOSE INNER DEMONS IS A UPLIFT TO MOVING ON IN YOUR LIFE...

WE ALL HAVE THEM AND FOR YOU TO ACKNOWLEDGE THE FACTS OPENLY IS COURAGE...YOU SET YOURSELF FOR A CLEARER MINDSET...THAT'S THE GOAL IN LIFE TO UNDERSTAND AND MOVE ON THE PATH OF DISCOVERY...LET THE LOOSE ENDS FALL WHERE THEY BE...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Dodanis Brewer
Dodanis Brewer

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I am an 15 year old artist who expresses her feelings through drawings and poems. I am kind, caring and sweet. more..

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