D/M

Something different, bit out there.

Frame
Bro
      kin
Frame

 

Lies
D
r
i
p
p
i
n
g
Sticking like glue

Replace
Black stock portrait
Good as new

Author's Note

There is definitely a theme to it...

Reviews

[Krabel]

One of those literal poems, and visual, tells us and shows us at the same time. I like the broken "bro - kin," maybe gives a hint of what the poem's about...could be about your bro or your family, your "kin"! Anyway, I was wondering what a black stock portrait is? Is it some sort of photographic term, a negative, or suggestive of something out of National Geographic: a stock photo of black Africans? My mind wanders...it's good to leave room for that!

[An owl on the moon]

The imagery and profound message fit so well with your unique style. Loved the glimpses of pictures, life in frames. Excellent write!

[:)]

A bit inventive eh .. :) I like this

Lies dripping sticking like glue .. That's right throw it all out ..

Replace it with something blank to create something else :)

I think I'm a fan of this ...

[Alicia™]

I've never seen anything like this, so this is definitely interesting. I really liked it! Very unique poem.

And just wondering, why is it called D/M?