But...

But every time you speak about his flaws,
it feels like you're holding an arc and a bow
Trying to hit the apple above my head,
but blindly, you hit my heart instead...

Author's Note

Just a free verse. Hope you guys like it.
P.s: Please excuse any grammer mistakes. (:

Reviews

[KWP]

This piece possesses one filled with empathy and compassion. Oh if only we could zip right the mouths of those who feel the need to bring others down.

To feel, to really feel to the fullest and have it burst from our chests is one of the greatest experiences of being alive, for then we learn so much about ourselves.

This poem is full of wisdom ... I love it x. X

[Rahaf Maaz]

Thank you very much. :)

[Black Star Adept]

Nice! This feels very smooth and I love the visuals

[Rahaf Maaz]

Thank You! :D

[Jennie Baron]

A lot of meaning can be read into these few lines and they could mean many different things to different readers. Well done; food for thought.

[Rahaf Maaz]

Exactly! Thank You Jennie. ^-^

[Matching Socks]

Interesting. Is she Cupid I wonder? :-)
Or a clumsy killer?
I'm thinking Cupid. :-)
Nice poem.

[Rahaf Maaz]

She can be anyone you want her to be. ;)
Thank you (:

[Matching Socks]

Cupid of course. :-)

[Daydreamer]

Welcome to Writers Cafe my bestie!!!♥♥♥
A great piece (that I have seen before:P)!
Love the main concept and ambiguity of the poem!!
Shine on xx

[Rahaf Maaz]

Double Thnx Babe!! :)