dreams and dialogue

you dream of portal people

stealing you from my side

and i tell you from the shower

that i'd rip the fabric of space time

and dive in after

soap slippery and seriously

ready to kick phantom a*s.

 

this is how we say we love each other.

 

every morning i come home

and we sweep up your subconscious

sort out the symbolism

from the silliness.

 

sometimes i wish i felt more

kalel than clark kent

that i could reach inside

that residual world

and choke the doubt demons

that play in the shadows of slumber.

 

but even

 

jesus isn't a superhero; 

he doesn't fly around

clothed with spandex salvation.

bleeding out

moire patterns 

in technicolor

tragedy.

 

so i try not to crucify myself

for you.

 

i gotta stay real

and save your dreams.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

this is now finished. thank you all for reviewing it.

Reviews

[Gandré]

"that i'd rip the fabric of space time

and dive in after

soap slippery and seriously

ready to kick phantom a*s." ------------------ha! I love you for this (yr gf forgives)
Stanza no 3: what a way to speak about a doubt, what another one...coudn't.. I feel it!

"jesus isn't a superhero;

he doesn't fly around

clothed with spandex salvation.

bleeding out

moire patterns

in technicolor
tragedy." ----------- I mean.........a deliciously painted tragedy of the christianity, how you see it. I saw it (and the other religions), too yet. not this brilliant way! wow. that s proud, straight forward. Works always. Bravo, sweetie. say hello to yr angel.

[Staci Brown]

this is my first experience with a "sci-fi-rommance" type of poetry! :D interesting start tho! :D

Faerie Blessings!

--faerie whisper (breaking the silence...)

[Daniela B]

well, if this is just a start.....I like it.