My Mistake

My Mistake

A Poem by Raging Thunder

I've never felt so lonely, 
I've never felt so lost,
This pain I feel inside of me, 
makes me want to stop.
But to stop loving you, 
is something my heart can't do.
The pain is unbearable, 
with words i can't explain.
Gazing upon your face i see, 
see that look of hate.
The loveless expressions i see, 
make me want to fade.
Loving you my dear, 
is maybe my mistake.
But love you i shall forever, 
cause i never learn from my mistakes.

© 2012 Raging Thunder


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Oh the memories this brings back. I often end up in this situation. Good job, I like it a lot!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I enjoyed this, such a valuable lesson here to learn.


Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 30, 2012
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Tags: hate, love, romance

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Raging Thunder
Raging Thunder

London, United Kingdom



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