Press On Oh My Dear Soul

Walk on oh my dear soul
Press on and don't look back
Be strong oh my dear soul
Despite all that you may lack

Don't fear the raging thunder
Don't fear the dark of night
Though the mighty waves do sunder
Press on and fight the fight

Be brave oh my dear soul
Stand strong through all the pain
Walk on oh my dear soul
Though you feel the fall of rain

Fight the battle within your heart
Though the walls around are breaking
Learn to finish what you start
Though because of fear your shaking

Press on oh my dear soul
And fight through all the pain
Stand strong oh my dear soul
If you fall then you'll be slain

Reviews

[Dutch Jr.]

Nice rhythm to this poem, too. This one is structured very well, with parallelism almost like a song. Overall, this was a good write.

In your last line. the word "than" should be "then".