Mindless

Sitting,
On the edge of the table,
I wonder,
Would you mind me sleeping?
Tired,
Oh this cringeful feeling.

Hmmm......

Oh I lie,
When I want to avoid time,
I wonder,
How do people lie in between,
Lonely,
Yet I crave for this solitary.

Hmmm......

Reviews

[Arya]

Wow finally someone actually describes the way I feel every single day.
Thank you for writing this.

[costa siwale]

TERSE AND SOOTHING
WELL WRITTEN

[Najam Us Saher]

Sometimes solitude is soothing and sometimes it is not.
Very well expressed the feelings, I really liked this.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime lonely is okay. A safe place to rest. Nice use of words and thoughts. Made the reader think. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Quill]

an understandable feeling