WARRIOR !

In life we find a warrior within every one .

Yes you do fail,
And you have been known for it .
A stardom achieved,
By the mistakes of a written destiny .
Yet you expect for remorse,
And you pray for it every night .
But even the shooting stars have shown,
A deaf ear to your pleadings .
You have been deprived of success,
And yet you are still working for it .
The staff of your belief ,
Never failing to make you rise again .
Yes you do fail,

For even the divine envies such warriors .

Reviews

[Hope]

Hmm..
A strong piece indeed.
The exaggerated ending gives the punch needed for the poem.
Good work!

[Raghib]

The last line is actually in reference to greek mythology. The gods in greek myths ARE envious of warriors that emerge here on earth and try to stop their heroic word by putting obstacles themselves . Some famous exampleas are Hercules, Perseus, Achilles

[Hope]

Got it Raghib:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You have given a name to all those who try and fail repeatedly. I loved the way you have voiced their thoughts and showed them a positive way.

[Raghib]

Thabk you Najam . It seems only two people are reviewing my poems . Thanks a lot for your support

[Najam Us Saher]

It is my pleasure. No need to mention thanks.

[wordman]

so you get up and knock the dust off and start again,bring out that warrior

[Raghib]

Thabks wordman . Seems like only two of you are reviewing my poems . Means a lot