Look Mother !

How a caring mother cares,
For her child to be all safe.
Away from the darkness,
She holds him secured to her breasts.
But cant you see the obvious,
In order to stop the evil,
She confined his own world .
And now he is trapped ,
In an unlit room of affection .
A place to be nurtured in,
A haven to reach out for,
When things go wary .
Look woman!
No matter how strong you can be,
You cannot go on forever.
Look what has your possession done,
It created chains unbreakable .
For today the same child stands,
Blinded by the truth .
The world is not the same,
As was shown in his euphoric chamber .
I watch him go in running ,
To wear those binds again .
Hoping you would keep him,
Close to your breasts today .
But you are sound asleep ,
Lost in your own blissful heaven .
Never to be woken again,
Even by his agonized screams .

Reviews

[chhimijiks]

Wow beautiful poem.
It poem has good flow.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Nice way of putting words into action........beautiful

[¿]

I find you deadly injured by an old wound that led you write this. But bro you puzzled me in if the mother is helpless won't god will help him?

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem.
"Look woman!
No matter how strong you can be,
You cannot go on forever. "
I believe a Mother's love is forever. In life and in death. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing word and thoughts.
Coyote

[Raghib]

But after death, she is helpless coyote .

[Avia]

Hmmm, what a strong piece. It speaks volumes.

[Raghib]

Glad to hear from you Avia .

[Kiwi.jh]

I think this is a lovely poem. Nice write, full of emotion and feelings.

[Raghib]

thank you for the visit . keep visiting

[wordman]

touching write my friend,a mother will always watch over you,on earth,or from heaven

[Raghib]

sorry dude . she is helpless out there

[Geodan]

Beautiful. It is a moving poem.

[Raghib]

Thanks for visiting