A kiss.

The anticipation before kissing that specific someone.

She smiles softly, meets his gaze

Her heart races, her temperature raised

Her cheeks redden, skin grows moist

She wants to speak, but can't find her voice.

 

She turns her eyes, not wanting to show fear

Please God, she prays, dont let him move near...

 

A hand reaches out, caresses her face

turning it slighly, she can hear his heart race

Overwhelmed by emotion, guilt and desire

She knows she should resist, but he has sparked a fire

 

She prays he moves closer, just one more step

let her guilt be extinguished, her desire be met!

 

Alive with passion, he searches her eyes

Awaiting her answer, awaiting his prize.

Slowly a gasp escapes her soft lips,

she grows breathless with passion, pleading for the kiss.

 

He inches closer, his hand resting on her cheek

His arms begin trembling, his knees become weak

Everything he wants, is within his grasp,

She closes her eyes, their lips meet, at last.

Reviews

[Not A Writer]

You have amazing talent that I have never seen. You build up the suspension at the very end but you also use imagery, what the girl is thinking, and rhyming for your poem also. I was amazed when I read this for I thought it was going to be a lame poem but man was I wrong!

[NeverSurrender]

Great poem. It surely builds up the suspension before the kiss, we've all felt like this before. Good job!

love,

N.S.

[Bexfinch]

wow thuis has great description welcome i like it

[Halkhend]

that is a lot of emotion. haha it had my heart beating fast lol good write

[Manda]

WOW! I remember this feeling all to well. It happened to me last summer. All these feelings were going through my head and his head too! God how I remember wanted him to just kiss me! I was tortured by the though for ever! And finally the day before I left to go back home for the year. He kissed me! And at last my suffering was gone! Nicely done! loved this!!!!!!!

[Silere]

This was my favorite.. so far.. I love this.. you capture so many emotions within your words. I felt each and every word as it was written and intended. The anticipation was the best.. You really have quite the talent for this.. It was such an easy read.. as the words flowed so very well. I enjoyed every single word and can't wait till I read more of your work. Thank you so much for sharing this with all of us. Please keep writing! The world needs you!!