DOOR OPENS

to hear the lock tumbler

door opens

i want to break from reality

everything vanishes before i see

what was never my notion

at last i stood for

you walk on a sick grounds

vaulted by withered stuffs

smokes emerge from the cracks

your next day can smash

all you wanted

and all you never got

and you can count the crows

sitting on the wall

and exactly

we come to know

the universe is functioning

perfectly

Reviews

[Rafique Farooqi]

Thanks Justin and Ria

[Ria Sheikh]

Yes it does function perfectly..n0 matter how imperfect things go for us

[J.M.B]

i love the last line Doc. I think it functions perfectly. Even with all its seeming imperfections.