FIRE OF TURMOILS

Author's Note

Watching the events,
from distance,
having a thin slice of glimpse,
accolade may be,
matter of pride,
or something at bigger stakes,
denouncing a dissident on turmoil,
wrapped crush on breaths,
repentance over past sins,
partially sensible,
motivated by anger and love,inscrutable to know the real,
bitterly tasted with frenzied joy,
worsened by fascinations,
we get from the people,
we can't understand.

Reviews

[Eldee]

Hmmm, I believe spelling wise you may want to change fascinations to "fascination", insert an a between "having" and "thin", and maybe reread over certain lines like the wrapped crush on breaths on. This does well to show your emotion though, good job :D I love your use of denouncing and dissident.