Red Angel
A Poem by Rae
For a moment there I was gone. For a minute there I was back. I saw you red angel I saw your strawberry hair. Once you were beautiful. Once.
© 2013 Rae
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A short, interesting poem. I believe you have a lot to say, I just miss some sort of hints as to how to read "red angel" in comparison to, say, black angel, white angel, blue angel - you could easily make it a little longer and still keep it mysterious. Poems are interesting because they can make you ponder, but if you get no help at all as to what to ponder about, they can be a drag. But thanks for sharing!
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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A short, interesting poem. I believe you have a lot to say, I just miss some sort of hints as to how to read "red angel" in comparison to, say, black angel, white angel, blue angel - you could easily make it a little longer and still keep it mysterious. Poems are interesting because they can make you ponder, but if you get no help at all as to what to ponder about, they can be a drag. But thanks for sharing!
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on April 30, 2013
Last Updated on April 30, 2013
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I write feelings, which could be taken the wrong way but most people just think it's a hard thing to do. I like writing short stories, poems, and articles. I have a lot in interest in the way human em.. more..
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