Feeling Unfelt

Happiness: we rarely feel it

Some never get to hold it

Its like a feeling unfelt

A mystery hiding just around the corner

and yet

We spend our whole lives..

Trying to find our way around that corner

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

No truer words could be spoken.. I could really resonate with this.. excellent write..xo

[Tate Morgan]

A very well done work
Trying to found our way around that corner
{ Find }
Just a thought

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I really liked this write, deep and well expressed.

Love the honesty of your poem, I so so recognize myself, in your words... Well done!

[Dove]

You can say so much in a few words that is really cool. I feel what you felt when you wrote this. Great Job! I love this.

[((Teenage_Poet_Loser))]

i love this =] omw... so little but yet so powerfull! i felt the pain if i can say that, you felt in writing this! really good, i like =]