Silver Notes

Needs a lot of work but i'm proud of it so far

Music rippling through the silent air

Silver notes parting the thick wispy clouds

Sun breaking through its dark foggy cover

As the musical sounds dance through the evening atmosphere

Playing in my airs, swaying my head back and forth to the light beats

Tapping my feet, eyes closed, in motion with the sounds all around me

Loving the feeling, singing its song

Feeling this feeling, as if I belong

Belong with the music, in the heart of the music

Dancing with the music, just stop

Feel the music

Spread your arms out and let it lift you up high

High to the heavens, the music carries me

This beautiful melody coming from the golden instruments

The ones with the sounds that pick me up high

Over my worries, my cares i don't, I wont worry

This music makes me feel like I belong

Now I play the music, i make my own silver notes

I am parting the thick wispy clouds

Breaking the sun loose from its dark wispy cover

I am creating these sounds myself

I am flying over my worries, my cares, I don't i wont worry

With my silver notes and gold in my hand

I don't, I wont, I only feel I belong

Reviews

[WhiteWillow]

Listen to the music, feel it, play it, be it. Wonderfully written. Music and words (together, even) can evoke strong emotions. Your words were like music to my ear. Beautiful!

[Dream Weaver]

Absolutely gorgeous...Love the dedication to
the musical imagery here...Nicely done...

How wonderful written, 16 years, and give me goosebumps! well done! if you like join me on http://www.last.fm/user/Elisisciousz/ for the real music addicts... Every note of yours, is touching my soul! thanks for sharing! friend!

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Its really very nice writing. I like whole poem.
Keep it up!
Do you read mine too ANGUISH...
god bless you.. Lucky!

[Raya Avans]

thank you all so much for your reviews! much appreciated :)

[Dove]

This is a beauitful poem. Thank you for sharing this piece it really is wonderful.

[Carrie Manor]

What a very beautiful work! Not only do you describe the effects of music on the soul, but your work itself has a feel that transports the soul as well! I especially like the description you put in the first four lines. (: