Images (Dedicated to INTUITUS)

for my Spencer

Images of you

Still play across my mind

Tho’ I try to make other friends

Loneliness is all I find.

 

There’s emptiness inside

Like my heart has got the flu

The God-shaped hole is filled

But not the one that’s shaped like you.

 

We were not good for each other

And from your state I fled

But why is it I still love you

And can’t get you out of my head?

 

I love the man I thought you were

The one you try to be

That’s why I’m jealous of her --

She has who used to love me.

Special message to S.   You may think my love is a false pretense to be ignored, but this I state as the absolute TRUTH UNWAVERED:

I have been, and always shall be YOUR FRIEND.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Bravo.............

[Mercury Rising]

Thank you. It was written with a former bf in mind. We are both writers on here, who have each other blocked so as to keep the Devil from gaining his foothold in our lives.

But no worries, God is on my side and He will restore me via the person He has for me. The God shaped hole is filled, but there is still another hole, in the shape of the right man for me. But next time, with God's help, I will not be mistaken.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)...............

[FlamingPhoenix]

Betrayal is hard and you convey this well. Very good read!

[Mercury Rising]

Thank you. I don't try to be really good on here; I just express my heart and soul. It's a kind of therapy. Thanks for the review! I'll be getting round to reading some of your work again and review it, just be patient. I'm at work this morning...

[FlamingPhoenix]

Enjoy work and writing is therapeutic!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oozing with sadness...and that emptiness...i have felt that time and again...

jacob

[Mercury Rising]

Sadness, I agree, but it will get better. Thanks for the review! Hang tight- I'll be reviewing some of your work soon, as I am at work now and can't really get too involved (boss and all that jazz!) lol