Softness

Softness

A Poem by Radicaldreamer
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Sweet whispers of my hand on your lips..

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Softness

Sweet whispers come to me

Swim about me my darling romance

Sway just a little bit into these daring arms

Where the night chill may touch your soft skin

And the sweet touch of my hand on our body

May warm even the coldest parts of you

That wrap around me like your fingers on my heart.

Sweet love come to me

Make this day be ours only

So we may dance among the stars

Two beautiful lovers trapped for eternity

Sharing that which we have longed for so long

A love so out of control so unrestrained

Touching the threads of fate as lovers for all time.

Sweet thoughts of your lips on mine

Warming my soul, Taunting my heart

Beautiful dreamer of my hearts embrace

I whisper that which would only touch your heart

A love so real so tempting of your soul

I leave my hand on your heart, My soft lips on yours..

And leave the echo of our love dangle about

Twirling are hearts together as though we were one

And let this moment be yours for a angel so true.

-Justin Fleischhacker-

“From my words were to reach your heart”

© 2008 Radicaldreamer


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This is by far the best love poem I have ever read, and pal, believe me I have read a dozen hanging around on the Caf�.

The entire poem is sublime- something that makes the soul tremble.
I was kind of disappointed with the ending dough... angels are a very common symbol.

A.M.


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 11, 2008