Betrayal

Sometimes in life , you mean nothing to the person who means everything to you

I left the world for you...

You left me for the world

Author's Note

For the 10 words contest.

Reviews

[Saddam]

it is not about words count but it is heart touch...
Very heart felt story it is.
right, whenever we love someone-that give us pain or lastly leave.

[Radhika]

yeah..thanks for appreciating!

[Cid]

OK! But, I think, this's a piece of "12 words" contest! Ha!
Anyway ...
yeah, again it's a good piece but I found here much pain and pain into the depth of the heart of yours. The world's very rude, bad always makes you sad! But the time's a very funniest thing ever because sometimes, it gives us much happiness and sometime, it grabs all the happiness and put us into the world of sadness but don't forget dear, Radhika ... the time and the world both are in the life and life's good but only n only if you treat the life right which means...if you live the life not for someone but for your own self!

This poem's very heartfelt and I hope soon .. you come outta your pain that's given by your someone.
Be safe, Radhika!

[Radhika]

Oops ! I JUST dont know how i didnt notice in my editing that its become 12 words! haha!
Anyways i am glad you saw through the pain i tried to depict through these lines but dont worry ,i'm in no such pain myself :)
Its just what i think that people who do undergo any such experience must be feeling.But as you said ..time's a great healer!

[Cid]

Ha! You now make me smile! Ha!
Great!

Well.. now am damn glad and happy to hear you are not in pain because I hate seeing someone as beautiful as talented as you feel sad so bad .. after all, I love seeing angels happy! Ha!
So, be happy, stay happy and live happy...cause, when your happy..the world's happy after all angels always make the world happy! Ha!