moon's fault

This poem points out the fact that afterall its not that easy to cheer up the mood of your loved one who is angry on you

Roothe hue ko manana itna asaan nahi hota

Waqt lagta hai ,jaldbazi mein ye kaam nahi hota

Kuch toh ki hogi khata chaand ne dharti se bhi 

Warna sadiyon se uske ird gird mandara na raha hota

Author's Note

This is in hindi

Reviews

[New Theory]

Good one . You can review some of my work. Thanks :)

[Radhika]

Thankyou! Sure :)

[New Theory]

Thanks for reviewing my work :)

[Rehan Roy]

'Kya khata ki hogi chaand ne...' Sundar rachna. Agar aap chahe to, isme ek-do pankti aur jor sakti hain.

[Radhika]

thankyou...i'll try adding on more to it!

[Rehan Roy]

You are most welcome, Radhika :)...

[Saddam]

badiya hai.... ye ek easi kavita hai jo aur age badh sakta tha....
kya khata hai chand ki jo madrata rahata hai?
very nice line you have created.

[Radhika]

thankyou..glad u liked it.
I didnt add furthermore to it so as to leave a pang of suspense and imagination of the readers!
Neverthless you could try continuing it fuurther ! :)

[Cid]

What a great "Shayri!"
Hey, I really loved this awesome way of yours. It's very good reading!

Well, "Dear, Radhika .. am not sure but, I think, your a great "Shayri oneself!"
So, please allow me now to say something in my ways .. in my shayri ...

"Kya chamaktei huay mottiyon se chand ko aur bhi roshan kar diya
Tumharei shabdon ke taar se ye jhan hei ek chamakta diya
Aur kitna julm is dharti pe dhaogii, Radhika ...
Apne kadmon se iss dharti ko to tumnei pehli se hi itna Roshan kar diya
Ki .. ab to ye chamkta diya bhi tumhari ankhon se kehta hei
ke .. "apne shabdon ki khushboo se tumnei to sabke dilon ko hi 'sawarg/jannant' bana diya!"

Ha!
OMG! Now am confused! who's the best Shayar .. you or me?? :/
haha! Of course, it's you!

Rating : 100/100!
Well done, keep up the great "Shayri!" :)

[Radhika]

Hey Cid ..Thanks a lot for your amazing review !
And definately you are a way better shayar !! :) your shayari is really good and flattering as well !

[Cid]

Your welcome, pretty!
Well, first off, thanks for appreciating my stupid "Shayri" lol and now hey, your the best one shayar .. so, the best shayar award goes to "RADHIKA" :)