Dreams

Dreams

A Poem by Radacach
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Written January 15, 2013

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Dreams
These dreams that I am having are so wrong
I wake up cold sweet
Trying to forget
But when I close my eyes again there those images are

Why cant I control my dreams
They scare me so bad
Remind me of my past

I don't want to sleep at night
It scares me
Those images haunt my dreams

My past now controls my dreams
So broken
So hurt
So many scars
That just won't fade

So as I lay in bed trying to forget
I think of u

You are my strength
For when I wake up in the night
I know u are there to comfort me

As I pray to you I feel strong again
So I close my eyes
And back to flood of images
I wake up screaming
So much pain
So much fear

I know it's not your fault
With u by my side
I will one day sleep again

© 2013 Radacach


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I know of which you speak, your words speak for all of us, for how many of us had just such experiences, my husband and I who have lived through many terrors, have had such recurring nightmare. I thank you for putting into word what many of us have felt , and sharing such emotion.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I know exactly what you mean!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I think we all have/had those dreams. Emotional and creative write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Do something awful, and you never forget. These kind of dreams suck. It's a constant reminder...and some are lucky to have someone to help them forget. I like this :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know those dreams. You've done an excellent job of putting the pain and fear into words. Well done. If I were you, I'd go back and change those few u's to you's though. Love you Kev(:

Posted 11 Years Ago


Radacach

11 Years Ago

Love you too Matt! And yeah need to fix those and glad you like this one so much!!
I really like this especially
"Why cant I control my dreams
They scare me so bad
Remind me of my past "
because i think so many of us have thought these exact thoughts and its so hard to not let our nightmares consume us. this poem also shows the struggle of moving forward but having your dreams pull you back and taking you to all the pain and hurt that you want to pretend never happened.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Radacach

11 Years Ago

Those lines are great a lot of my emotion is in this poem glad that you like it:)!!
I know of which you speak, your words speak for all of us, for how many of us had just such experiences, my husband and I who have lived through many terrors, have had such recurring nightmare. I thank you for putting into word what many of us have felt , and sharing such emotion.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good my friend. Nothing has power over the eternal Word. That is your shield from all fears and all threats.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

My past now controls my dreams
So broken
So hurt
So many scars
That just won't fade

-couldn't have said it better myself, I know these feelings well. It's hard to run from something that's inside of you, and sometimes they never leave, I hope your scars will fade. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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