"Sweet Reality turns into a Broken Memory"

Its a tragic love poem.

You promise me that we will be together,
And we will live happily forever,
But why do you break that promise?
And before too long, you'll be in my memories

You said "I love you and please promise me one thing"
And I said "let's change topic, and just sing"
Then you hold me and said "if I'm gone, please don't cry"
And I hold you back and said "l can't promise but I'll try"

Then I heard your heart stop beating, and you want me not to cry.
I didn't even know that everything you said was your last goodbye.
I'm wishing you, please stay with me,
Because my life is lock forever and you're the only key.

Even if I die, I'll bring our memories unto my grave,
And I know somewere, you're my angel sent to save.
I'm begging you, please don't leave me,
Because without you, these eyes will never see.

Author's Note

This poem was inspired by my life. Its about a guy who is sick, and I've got nothing to do but to fight everyday then I just write down my feelings, But anyways, I'm a teen-ager, so if you saw some wrong grammar or what. Just ignore it :)

Reviews

[Jack Kennedy]

I like this one. I didn't too much care for the other one I read but this one to me is solid!