Softly

Softly

A Poem by Rachel
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Murder she wrote(literally being that i'm a she and I wrote it!)

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Sneak, sneak softly.

Her form calls

Her neck beckons

Resisting only a word.

 

Sneak, sneak softly.

Face enthralls

Breath in lungs

Stay close, forward.

 

Sneak, sneak softly.

Or she may wake

Shatter the vision

Ruin the flavor.

 

Sneak, sneak softly.

Feelings you make

Sit and listen

Keeping a favor.

 

Sneak, sneak softly.

Alone another day

Content for the night

Her blood stilled.

 

Sneak, sneak softly.

Trying another way

Filling the night

Still you're thrilled.

© 2008 Rachel


Author's Note

Rachel
*shiver*

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Just the right amount of creepy..... it, more than softly, makes it's mark. Can see this like a movie clip in my mind.... black leather gloves and just the right bit of low music..... good one

Kath

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Added on August 3, 2008
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Rachel
Rachel

Ratcliff, AR



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