Edmund and the foxA Chapter by RachelWroteItPROLOGUE All the best
stories start out with “once upon a time” and this story is no different. Once
upon a time, in a small village that was halfway between the tall craggy
mountains and the warm and sparkling sea, there lived a woman. The woman was
small and spritely, with reddish-blond hair slowly streaking with grey, and
nearly colorless grey eyes with a golden ring around the pupil. She was a brown witch, and lived some
distance outside of the village, with her three children and a languid grey cat
named Stealth. The three children
were fatherless, and no one ever spoke of what had become of their father, or
fathers. It was simply known that the
brown witch carried the three children alone, and bore them alone, and raised
them alone. Had any other woman in the
village done such a thing it would have been the talk of absolute scandal, but
the village needed the brown witch and her potions and knowledge, and the
village enjoyed the three children, two boys, three years apart, called Oliver
and Edmund, and a daughter, who was frail and sickly to the point that even her
mother’s magic couldn’t heal her, called Violet. Chapter
One Edmund
and the Fox The first story of
note comes from Edmund, who had his first proper adventure at the age of
eight. Prior to the age of eight, such
incidents cannot be regarded as “adventures” but rather “mischief” and are
described in hushed tones by others as “Recall that time when Eddie was five,
and he got lost?” But by the age of
eight, it takes much longer for grown people to realize that a boy may or may
not be lost, and they are much more willing to give that boy the opportunity to
have an adventure, and that is what happened to Edmund on this day. Now, one must
understand that Edmund was not a child of nobility. He didn’t have a tutor and a nanny to mind
him and learn him his letters. Rather,
Edmund’s mother was the brown witch of the village, which was something like a
healer, but even witches need to earn money and even witches’ children need to
eat, so at the age of eight, Edmund started to work in the village as a
messenger, which was a common enough job for children of his status, and he was
one of many eight to ten year old children who wore a red sash across his chest
and ran through the village, taking messages and parcels to other villagers and
bringing home his pouch filled with coins for his mother. On one very lovely
day, Edmund left his mother’s cottage, which was far outside of the village’s
walls, and walked for a way with his brother, Oliver. Oliver had been a
messenger too, but now he was eleven, he was too old. Oliver had a fine bow and set of arrows, and
was a skilled hunter, even as he was so young, so he spent his days hunting
small game to skin and sell at the market and gathering herbs for his mother. It was Oliver’s duty to walk Edmund to the
village each morning, lest he become lost in the woods. This aggravated Edmund, because he felt quite
certain that no one had walked Oliver to the village when he was a message boy,
and that he, Edmund, was only being subjected to this humiliation because he
had the misfortune to be the younger brother. “You can leave
off, Oliver. I know how to reach the
village by now. There’s only one way to
get there from our home anyway,” Edmund said, kicking a rock. “No there isn’t.
There’s a score of ways to get to the village, you just only know the way that
follows the path,” said Oliver loftily, “I know many ways, But I usually set my snares within ten paces
of it so I can check them while I walk you.”
“Well, it’s a way
I know. And I don’t need a nursemaid
like you following me and making all the other messengers think I’m a
baby. Even little Evelyn Marsh, the
Cooper’s daughter, who turned eight just a fortnight ago doesn’t get walked to
the square by her brother,” Edmund retorted, kicking his rock again and having
it skitter into the underbrush. “That’s because
the Marshes live in the village. We live
outside it. Anyway, mother says I’m to
walk you to the village, so I do.” Oliver said in that bland, unconcerned way
of all elder brothers the world over that is so infuriating to their siblings. Edmund was
annoyed. Every day, Oliver walked him
all the way to the center of the square, and if Eddie tried to run ahead, he
would catch him and hold him by his shoulder until they reached the square and
Oliver would hand Edmund over to the herald and said, “Mind him, he’s slippery”
and the herald would clap Oliver on the shoulder like he was a man even though
he wasn’t and the other messengers would laugh at Edmund, so he didn’t try to
slip away anymore. On this day,
however, Edmund found himself in tremendous luck, because as the walked, Oliver
checked each of his small snares for game, and on this day, one of the snares
had caught a tortoise. A tortoise was not something that would be easy to sell,
and Oliver had no desire to kill it for its shell. “Hello,
Grandfather,” Oliver said, kneeling to inspect the snare, “Let’s set you free,”
But the tortoise
had struggled quite a bit and the snare was very tangled and damaged and Oliver
had to sit down cross-legged in the dirt and pull out his knife to start the
operation. “I am going to be
late for the herald,” Edmund said, “Let me just get on with it, we aren’t far,
and then you can save your precious turtle,” Oliver was trying
very hard to disentangle the tortoise without getting his fingers snapped, so
he told Eddie, “Go ahead then, but don’t tell Mam, she’ll box my ears. Go straight to the square and I’ll be back
for you at sundown,” So Eddie took to
his heels and walked down the path. But
of course, he did not go straight to the square. First, he stopped
to climb a tree, and inspect a bird’s nest. Then , he strayed from the path
some distance to look at a doe and her twin fawns drinking at the bubbling stream. After the deer
went away, Eddie found a blackberry bush, and stopped to strip the berries from
the bush into his messenger’s bag to share with his friends, Christopher and
Marcus and Livvy. Halfway through the
berry picking operation, it began to rain. Eddie pulled the hood of his shirt
up, and stuffed his sash into his bag so it wouldn’t get soaked, forgetting
that the bag was now full of blackberries, and that would doubtless be far
worse for the red sash, and started back toward the path. Eddie wasn’t as
familiar with the forest as his brother was, and he realized that he had lost
track of time as well as of his way, and now it was pouring rain and getting
very dark in the woods. He looked at the
ground for his own footprints to follow, and eventually, he reached the stream
where he had watched the mother deer and her speckled fawns. The rain was
falling so hard that the water had risen considerably, with debris flowing
rapidly down stream, and the edges of the water breaking over and flooding the
banks. At this moment,
there was a terrible crash of thunder, and a brilliant ribbon of lightening,
and Eddie heard a sound. It sounded
exactly like a small child crying wordlessly.
Eddie looked all around for the child, and realized that the sound was
coming not from a lost child (two lost children in the woods would be very
unlikely indeed) but from a fox, who was
digging frantically at her flooding den by the banks of the river. There were two wet and shivering fox kits
huddling in the dirt, but the mother kept digging at her den, which was
beginning to collapse. Eddie approached
the fox family, and the mother fox looked at him with intelligent amber eyes
and frantically pawed at the ground. “What is down
there, sister fox?” Eddie asked her. Eddie set his bag aside and began to dig in
the soft mud with his hands, and after several minutes, he felt wet fur beneath
his fingers. It was another fox kit! Eddie pulled the
kit out of the mud and used his shirt to wipe the mud and water from its
face. It was very still and limp in his
hands. The mother fox nuzzled at it in his hands for a moment, and then gave
him a sorrowful look because the kit was dead, and took her remaining brood to
higher ground. Eddie studied the
fox kit in his hands. He was very small,
and not red like his mother or siblings, but silver and white, under a coating
of mud. He was about the size of a half-grown
kitten, and Eddie placed his fingers on his little chest, and felt a flutter of
a heartbeat. Maybe the little baby thing was still alive. Eddie tucked the fox kit up into his shirt,
against his own heart, and held him in place his hands, and started back toward
his cottage, where his mother would
certainly be able to help the kit. She
was magic, after all. The rain had
washed away all of Eddie’s footprints. The wind had lashed all the branches and
foliage into unfamiliar shapes. The
lightening lit the forest in flash-frames. He had lost the river, and lost
himself entirely in the woods. Eddie did not
cry. He was eight years old, and a
messenger, and he had just rescued a baby fox from a flooding den, and he was
not going to cry because of the rain. He
was going to be smart. A few paces away, there was a large oak tree with a
hollow trunk. Eddie crossed to the tree and peered inside. It was dark, and he couldn’t see anything. He
found a rock in the dirt and tossed it into the tree trunk, and waited to see
if anything would come skittering out, and nothing did, so he tucked himself
and his kit into the hollow tree and waited for the rain to let up. He drew the
kit out of his shirt and rubbed his little body between his hands. He breathed warm breath on his face. He brushed
drying mud out of the pretty silvery fur.
And slowly, the kit began to come around. He became less limp, and he curled into
Eddie’s small hands, and give soft little snuffling sounds beneath his chin. Eventually, the
rain did stop, and Eddie stepped out into the forest again, and stared about,
trying to orient himself. It didn’t take long, because he soon found one of his
brother’s snares, when it snapped up around his foot. Sprawling, and barely lifting the kit out of
danger of being crushed, Eddie yelped, and then inspected the web of catgut
around his ankle. It was indeed on of
his brother’s snares; he could tell because there was a small leather tag attached
to the snare that held his brother’s mark, the letter O with a fletched arrow
through it. “Are you alright,
little brother?” Eddie asked the fox kit, which whimpered at him. Eddie loosed the snare from around his foot,
and tried to reset it, but he wasn’t skilled enough, so he just took it down
and wound the snare around his forearm like a bracelet to return to his
brother. Eddie walked and
walked. He ate some of the blackberries
in his bag, and drank from the stream, and offered some berries and water to
the kit. He took a nap on a sunny rock that had dried off. And when he woke
up, it was nightfall. Suddenly, Eddie
was very worried indeed. The sky was
orange and purple and stars were starting to come out. The quarter moon was rising over the tree tops. The fox kit was snuggled
beneath Eddie’s chin, warm and trusting, but Eddie was getting very worried. It
was dark. He never made it to the
village. His brother would have come for
him and the herald would have told him that Eddie hadn’t shown up at all. Then Oliver would go tell his mother that
Eddie hadn’t gone to the village, and his mother would be furious. And what if they never found him? What if he
had to wander the forest for the rest of his life, which would probably be
quite short now? Eddie looked
around him. The trees looked like they
were all pointing accusing fingers at him in the darkness. Naughty boy, naughty boy, you should have stayed on the path! You
should have stayed by your brother’s side! Naughty boy! They seemed to scold. “Hush up, you
trees. I had to leave the path to save
the fox,” he said, “And anyway I can’t be that far away. Oliver’s snare was just over by those trees
and he said his snares were always ten paces from the path!” Eddie ran up to
the place where he had fallen in the snare, and found the great scruffed up
underbrush from where he sprawled, and he started to walk from it. On pace eight, he realized he probably needed
to take a few more steps because his legs were shorter than Oliver’s, so he
took thirteen steps. No path. He ran back and
set off in the opposite direction.
Again, no path. He ran back and
slowly circled the place where the snare had been. He took a stick and carved a
big X in the dirt by the two ways that didn’t lead to the path, and by the way
that led to the rock he had slept on, because he knew that didn’t lead to the
path either. That left only one way to
go. “What do you
think, little brother?” he asked the fox, peering down his shirt to look at
it. It blinked its amber eyes at him,
“Alright, one more way to go!” And Eddie took off
the last way, ten steps, then thirteen, then fifteen and then he was on the
path. As Eddie walked
along the path, with water squelching in his boots and dripping from his hair,
he encountered a man from the village, who was the blacksmith. “You there! There
you are! The whole village has raised the hew and cry for you! Your mother is
frantic for you!” said the blacksmith, grabbing Eddie by the back of his shirt
like a puppy by the scruff , “Your mother will tie a bell around your neck,
just you watch!” It did not take
long for the blacksmith, who was a giant of a man with long legs like tree
trunks, to reach the edge of the clearing where Eddie lived with his
family. There was a stone wall around
the property, and an arched wooden gate etched with runes. The blacksmith let Eddie go and he ran under
the arched gateway and felt the tingle of power and protection he always felt
when he returned to his home. His sister lay in
her carriage with her doll in her lap, and saw him first. “Mama! Mama he’s
back!” she cried, lifting her arms toward him. Eddie leaned forward so Violet
could wrap her arms around his neck from her place. Oliver emerged
from one end of the house, and his mother from they other, and they converged
upon him, a cacophony of scolding voices. His mother
crackled with maternal indignation, her eyes flashing like steel but her arms
warm as they circled him. “What were you
thinking? How dare you go walking into the woods alone! So many misfortunes
could have befallen you!” said his mother.
Eddie pulled the
fox kit out from under his shirt at last.
Violet clapped her hands and squealed with delight. Eddie laid the kit in her lap for her to hold,
and relayed the tale to his mother. As
he ended his story, his mother’s eyes and mouth had softened. “You’ll grow up to
be a fine man, Eddie. You are courageous and kind, and your actions
today have earned you a familiar who follow you for all of your days.” She
said. “A familiar? Like you have? Am I going to have magic too?”
said Eddie, “You all have
magic. You just haven’t learned it yet.
And yes, exactly like I have,” she replied, “What will you name him?” Eddie studied the
fox kit in his sister’s lap and thought for a moment. “Perhaps I’ll call him Moonlight,” “A fine and
auspicious name. Now, please, my son, do
not wander into the woods alone again.
You’re not yet a man nor a mage.” “Yes, Mama. I won’t wander again,” said Eddie. But
of course, even though he tried his hardest, Eddie didn’t keep his promise, and
he had many more adventures before he was a man. © 2019 RachelWroteIt |
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Added on October 3, 2019 Last Updated on October 3, 2019 Tags: sister, brother, magic, daughter, sons, fairy tale, family, sacrifice, witch, norse mythology AuthorRachelWroteItEagle Mountain, UTAboutHello! I am a writer and poet, and the single mother to two young boys and a little girl with very special needs. I am a feminist, an advocate for domestic violence survivors, a supporter of destigm.. more..Writing
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