Prologue

Back then, my name was different.  Back then, everything was different. Let us call this the story of Before. For the purpose of this story, I’ll call myself Jane. I will call him John, and let’s call them, Jack and Emma Smith. There will be a distinct absence of chunks of dialogue in this story as I don’t remember the exact words that were said and in some cases revealing exact conversations could compromise my identity. I will leave this manuscript with a trusted friend to be published at a later date

Reviews

[Nienor Niniel]

I have to echo a previous reviewer: Intriguing! Assumed names? What could have led to that? Something the narrator did or something the narrator knows? And I always like the idea of a story being a manuscript written by the narrator; it lends a sense of realty, I guess, to the first-person perspective.

I don't have enough time to read more tonight, unfortunately, but I will tomorrow!

[Rachel_Biggs]

Thanks, I should be adding more soon. :)

[Sam A]

Intriguing! I will read as I have opportunity.

[Rachel_Biggs]

Thank you!

[MoriartyMesa]

Have read the first and I hope many chapters. I like where your going.

[Rachel_Biggs]

Glad you enjoyed it!