Unanswered Questions.

Love used to be so easy for us.

There was no jelously.

No shame.

No embarssment.

As children, we were

so innocent.

So pure.

We didn't know

what we were doing. N

ow that we're older,

it's all complicated.

Now there's drama,

insecurity,

and the obstacles

of life.

Slowely, it starts to

tear us apart. 

Why does it have to

be so hard? 

Remember when

we were in love? 

Do you remeber that? 

Remeber how we didn't

feel the weight of the world? 

Hand in hand,

we just kept on

spinning in circles.

The only thing we saw clearly

were each other.

Everything else seemed

blurry.

Because nothing else mattered.

We were free. 

Why did you have to

let go of that? 

Why weren't you happy? 

Why is love so complicated now? 

Every time I beg you to come back,

you tell me to move on.

You tell me that it's not me,

it's you.

I don't want to move on.

If anybody, you are the

one for me.

No one dosen't quite

understands me like you do. 

Can't you see that

I can't live without you? 

Can't you hear my hert beat

 out of my chest when I'm with you? 

Why don't you love me? 

Why did you let everything

negative in this world tear us apart? 

How could you do this to me? 

Why can't we not feel again? 

The pain of the world is

insidious to me.

I can't face it.

It's me who is making

love complicated.

It is me who tore us apart.

I still dream of you though.

I still play out our ending in my mind.

I still think of how

I could of done things differntly.

 

 

 

 

Why didn't I?

Reviews

[Mathias Winters]

This sounds more like a poem than a story. I suppose it could be a story because there are paragraphs, but those paragraphs could easily be split up into lines. The point of the poem seems meant for modern poetry as well. I would make this a poem.

Anyway, it was good. It had a point and it had focus. You are obviously a very philosophical person.

[...]

very nice record what happen when is all over. and we bellieve all is over. you choose good words what describe this void and emptyness . i wish you all get better . be brave.

[***Tori***]

Rachel stop being terrible to yourself you are a beautiful person and an amazing writing! stop being such a jerk wad. AND STOP DELETING YOUR WRITING OR ILL NEVER EVER EVER TALK TO YOUR ASIAN FACE AGAIN!!! okay?












Luv ya
~TORI

[RachelKim]

Butthead.

[Falling Leaf.]

Love may be painful to end but it will come again.

You need to go through and do an editing. There are many spelling errors. I suggest you do that before you post your pieces.

Anyway, this was an okay piece. I'm not really a fan of poems on heartbreak so don't feel bad that I'm not fond of it. It's good, I just don't fancy it.

[Kelly M.]

Aww, this was great and sad! Loved it:)

[Taylor H.]

I enjoyed this

[Victoria Elizabeth]

Very good, I love it and like SuicidePact said, life is full of many unanswered questions!!! Great job!!!

[Madeline]

lol "Insidious"!!! It's funny cause we both watched that last night! That's why it's funny! LMAO!! Louis moment right there! Amazing! Liked this so much!! Love ya Rach!

[SuicidePact.]

Love this!

life is full of many unanswered questions.

I think it would be good as a poem as well :)

great job xx

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Ohmygosh, I totally love this Rachel :)
You did a magnificent job on this. You know I am into the whole love thing and how it should be easy for everyone.
Great job once again!

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)