Pain

I can feel your pain

From miles away

It has a strong, powerful resonance.

Your soul is like a guitar body

Holding inside the sound of sadness

And it vibrates every time your thoughts

Bring back those old damned words

And it hurts.

I can feel your pain by only taking a look into your eyes

Your sight holds the lyrics of this sad song

And I can read it

Even if the letters are unknown for an ordinary being

It hurts me.

It hurts so badly when I can feel your pain striking your inner core

I want to act like a healer and touch your soul

I want to receive all your pain and transform it into dust

I want to destroy everything that sweeps away the smile of your beautiful face.

I want to use my love as the potion of wonders

And bring to life the miracle that waits to be awakened.

I need you. And you need too

A new you.

Reviews

[tedefroberts]

I can feel the depth of your feelings in this piece. That's one of the elements of a really good poem.

[Rachel Jane]

I'm glad you liked it :)

[K.C. Zbryk]

This is a very beautifuly composed piece an i love the comaprisons contained within. Each line contains such sensitivity and a longing for someone to heal. Brilliant work. Welcome to the WC, and i look forward to reading more.

[Rachel Jane]

thank you :)

[K.C. Zbryk]

no problem