You Can Go Now

Okay;

You can go now,

exhale and run.

 

This time, there won’t come

any words, nor a trip..

No point pissing off

with the same stale guilt;

 

emphatically shunned.

You slip easy into

a more recent version,

scummed from the shallow

side of perversion;

 

opposites  perceptions

of the same desire.

 

Reviews

[Tomás Ó C..]

Thatll tell him all right!!!

[Edmond Dantes]

"a more recent version,

scummed from the shallow

side of perversion;"

i like this. Good job rach.

[Just An Observer]

Wow, a good, hearfelt write. I like it. Kudos!

[Ladysue]

Wow, this tells it like it is!!! I really enjoyed this. The best line ever...

opposites perceptions of the same desire....

the prior stanza is excellently expressed!!!!