Love

Love is something to hold on to,
something to charish forever,
i charished my love,
i enjoyed every minute I had,
it's hard to put in words,
nobody understands how I feel,
they say i'm young and don't know what love is,
but i do,
belive i do,
i do,
it wasn't that long after he left me,
how much i relized i loved him,
it is hard to belive he loved me,
very hard,
to hard,
people say he was obssesed with me,
but if he was,
he wouldn't have done this,
just the other day I thought i was over him,
then i relized,
i never will be....

Reviews

[alex]

Good story. A few misspellings but overall the story flows well. If you are going for descriptive add some more visuals but if not then "to hard" should be changed to "too hard"