life's Reality

life's Reality

A Poem by Luna Lucretia Lawson
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A quick poem about reality

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Life is just a formality,
And everything face's mortality,
Gangs choose brutality,
And others look to spirituality,
Some people just become another fatality,
This is just normality,
People govern and look for commonality,
But one side does not share the hospitality,
This is reality.

© 2014 Luna Lucretia Lawson


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A short concise poem. I loved the way you found enough endings to rhyme.
very well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Thanks for entering this in my little competition. It wouldn't be fair to comment now but I will after the contest has ended.
regards. Clive
P.S. I like this. but don't say I said so.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Luna Lucretia Lawson
Luna Lucretia Lawson

littlehampton, United Kingdom



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Hey my name is Luna, i am 19 and i like writing, drawing and painting and reading, i like manga and anime also i love video games. I love doing research on mythology, languages superpowers. My favori.. more..

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