The Perfect One

I was thinking one day and ideas just popped in my head, i started writing this song, its not to great so please don't hate but please enjoy! Thanks!

                                                              (verse 1)

                                          I gave up on love cause i found no one,

                                                 Lost all my hope just let it go

                                           then i realized there will be someone

                                              to hold me close, never let me go

                                                            (Chorus) 

                                        I've been searching for you this whole time

                                          wondering when and where you'd be

                                           Then I finally gazed into your eyes

                                                      And I realized,

                                 You're the perfect one, you're the perfect one

                                                  You're the only one

                                                         (Verse 2)

                                              When I met you I knew that,

                                        You were the one for me to love so dearly

                                          I knew that I needed you here with me

                                                          (Chorus)

                                       I've been searching for you this whole time

                                         Wondering when and where you'd be

                                         Then I finally gazed into your eyes

                                                     And I realized

                                You're the perfect one, you're the perfect one

                                                  You're the only one

                                                         (Bridge)

                               Don't you understand I need you in my life

                        And I need you to promise  me that you'll never let me go

                                       Never let me go, never let me go....

Author's Note

Tell me what you think of my song if if you'd like me to continue writing songs!

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Your poems and songs are incredibly good.
It is not your writing that I would fault, but
the psychology of your delivery.
So far I see you writing for some boy that
you have set your mind too.
I suggest that you leave the male counterpart
open, let your reader decide who you are
writing too and about. If it is a boy that is
reading you, let him believe that he is the
subject of your poem---- he will be back to
read more----- this may involve a lot of readers.
Good luck,
----- John

[xSamilynnx]

wow this is really good dude :D nice job ^__^

[Emily Carr]

Aww I Like It! Its Not Bad.! You Lied To Me.. Its Amazing! Hahaha