Shades of Love

one of those cool little parentheses poems

He'll say (he loves you.)

(He can)'t (be trusted.)

(He will) never (be what you need.)

(He's) not (the one.)

(He will) not (kiss you) with sincerity.

He will find pleasure (in) your pain.

He's fire, you're (the rain.)

(His eyes are) fogged glasses (veiling a) cruel (soul.)

He will leave you (like) a vase, destroyed, nearly unfixable.

His temper and fist will be (yours) to appease, even when you're (broken.)

(He'll break) you, leave those words unspoken;

He won't care to break (down your walls,) he'll (forever) be hiding behind his own.

(He will) never (love you.)

Author's Note

I hope you like this!

Reviews

[Blotted Ink Productions]

What an awesome idea! Love the use of the parenthesis to show the contrast in negative and optimistic thought! 100/100!