Rearview Mirror

With all the smoke in my eyes 
I look through the rearview mirror
And stare, through the rain and fog,
directly at the sun.

Mira
Don't you ever wish that you could 
spend one day away from the sky?
Hasta esta noche, patiently 
I wait for your reply...

Reviews

[Sarah]

It certainly is very pretty, the description is lovely & I loved the occasional Spanish. It set the tone for the poem. Keep writing. :)

[Legion]

It is pretty. Has a nice visual to it. I like it. A bit peaceful feeling. One of the best short poems I've read in awhile. Kudos.

[Annalisa]

...this is very simplistic...but amazing none the less...I'm not sure why but I loved this. Twas gorgous.