Nature

Nature

A Poem by Rac7hel
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I think this is about drugs. Yes, it's about drugs.

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Drop the moon in the sky

Pull the water out of the clouds

Rain on sanity, throw water on the weak

And maybe ask them to die

Drop the moon from the sky

Drain lives out of ears

And lie when they ask about you

Say you're fine

As you plop the moon back in the sky

© 2008 Rac7hel


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That's an interesting take on Nature there Rachel, the moon being symbolic of day-to-day emotions, and you are right, sometimes pretending is the best way to make ourselves believe we are okay. But by the sound of your bio, you are doing great. I do like how you write, it's insightful without being wordy...

Posted 16 Years Ago


I suppose this is about the dichotomy of being high by night, and just plain boring by day. I think it's very special. I wonder what you think?

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Rac7hel
Rac7hel

New Orleans, LA



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I'm Rachel, more commonly known as Rac7hel around these here internets. I write pretty poetry and take pretty pictures... I try my damnedest to play pretty music. I do other stuff but I'll save that f.. more..

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