Is This Love?

I just found it written on my diary. thought it's worth sharing.Hope you like it.

I think of you more than anything.
Even when I am not thinking of anything,
you are there in my heart.

In solitude, I feel you flowing through my veins.
In silence ,I can hear your sound.

During the day, you are the sun for me.
During night, you become my moon.
During the snowy days, you are the cold I catch.

you are the breeze, you are the wind,
you are the storm.
you are just everything for me.

During happiness, I call you 'that smile on my face'.
During sadness, you are the tears flowing through my eyes.

Do you belong to me or I belong to you.
you are that unquenchable thirst, I have ever felt.

you are that wounded smile on my lips.
you are just everything good and bad that happened to me.
you are the beginning, you are the end..

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

Wonderful write.....Well that diary is lucky to have these words written in its pages....Full of passionate feelings of love....Simplicity maintained and you did very well to connect with the reader....Welcome to writerscafe.....Happy new year.....God bless you....

[Raahi]

thanks a lot for your insightful review.

[TizzyWrites]

Very touching! I imagine it to be sensitive and emotional for those going through the same thing. Good work :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem for love.
"you are the breeze, you are the wind,
you are the storm.
you are just everything for me. "
The above lines. Perfect. I liked the way you described the desire of the love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Girl With A Pen]

I love this poem. It's everything love should be between two people. Love them in the good and bad, love them even when they bring the bad. This was a very wonderful and thought write. :) Thank you fro sharing

[Raahi]

thanks for such a good review.

[Barbara Walker]

I find this piece both very beautiful and very scary and I don't know if I can explain my feelings in strong terms! All I can say is that for one person to imbue you with these feelings is extraordinary and it is scary for the same reason. And said opinion is a telling reflection of me!

[Raahi]

it depends on the way we think.Such a love is beautiful and scary, I can understand you. love that's deep enough can both enlighten the world or destroy it.love has such effects.
thanks for the review.

[Meeks]

How long ago was this written, do you know?

I like this particularly because its a break from what everyone else on here writes. So far I have found writers writing about depression, cutting yourself, and a few about love. And maybe bullying, sometimes.
The blend you created doesn't fit the categories, so keep at it. I'll keep reading as long as its different, and I feel others will as well.
Keep writing...

[Raahi]

it has been written a year ago,almost.I would continue to maintain some standards.Thanks for the review.