Is This Love?

I just found it written on my diary. thought it's worth sharing.Hope you like it.

I think of you more than anything.
Even when I am not thinking of anything,
you are there in my heart.

In solitude, I feel you flowing through my veins.
In silence ,I can hear your sound.

During the day, you are the sun for me.
During night, you become my moon.
During the snowy days, you are the cold I catch.

you are the breeze, you are the wind,
you are the storm.
you are just everything for me.

During happiness, I call you 'that smile on my face'.
During sadness, you are the tears flowing through my eyes.

Do you belong to me or I belong to you.
you are that unquenchable thirst, I have ever felt.

you are that wounded smile on my lips.
you are just everything good and bad that happened to me.
you are the beginning, you are the end..

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

Wonderful write.....Well that diary is lucky to have these words written in its pages....Full of passionate feelings of love....Simplicity maintained and you did very well to connect with the reader....Welcome to writerscafe.....Happy new year.....God bless you....

[Raahi]

thanks a lot for your insightful review.

[TizzyWrites]

Very touching! I imagine it to be sensitive and emotional for those going through the same thing. Good work :)

[Ayushi Beura]

YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER...A HEART TOUCHING AND WELL WRITTEN POEM...EXCITED TO READ YOUR MORE LINES FROM YOUR DIARY

[Anindita Janhabee]

I just could not stop myself from reading it again, I really don't understand what type of magic is put here.... just speechless, about reality and hope...
thanks for sharing this wonderful piece...
Anindita

[Asra Hakak]

this is so very good, like seriously the flow too damn smooth
the imagery you created is outstanding and this was quite relatable
simply loved this write up

[micky]

This is a really amazing and beautiful piece....well done...it actually made me smile so gold star for that ;)

[Cecile Wonder]

this is very well written and speaks from the heart. you are an amazing writer

[Ayesha Khan]

Good piece.One can relate to.rhythm and imagery is apt. Keep writing.

["Τζίνα Υάωω"]

Wow! It's pretty good! Keep writing

[Anindita Janhabee]

Very touching... The striking emotion put into this poem is wonderful. 'You are the beginning and you are the end' is the best conclusion according to me. I think your diary will be very lovely to you for all the best descriptions of your feelings. Well done friend, keep it up...
Hope you will check out my writings too...

[Mary Christabel George]

This is called complete surrender in Love.
Wish you good luck in the journey because you return loosing yourself here.

[Coral Fang]

very pretty words
simple but sweet, passionate, and powerful.
Very well done.
I look forward to reading more of your poems.