Lost in time, a haiku series

Lost in time, a haiku series

A Poem by RaZiTheGreat

Forgotten in time,
Lost forever in the years,
Naught but a child.

Slowly growing up,
Rearanging life's structures,
Why must it hurt so?

Solitude is nigh,
Almost here, taunting me,
Why can't I have peace?

Soft light caresses,
Shunning away the darkness,
Like beautiful lies.

A warm body aches,
Together we touch and hold,
I love you so much.

Naught but a child,
Lost forever in the years,
Forgotten in time.

© 2008 RaZiTheGreat


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Most wonderfully done, each verse a stand alone, building a nice work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Excellent string of senryus

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on May 13, 2008
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RaZiTheGreat
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