THE OLD OAK TREE

THE OLD OAK TREE

A Story by RW Erskine
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yours to discover

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I was walking along
for quite some time
when I became weary
Sat down beside a very old
oak tree to rest awhile
My eyes started getting heavy
so I thought I would have a sleep
When I heard 
a very deep but old sounding voice
Was I dreaming
this can not be so
I'm still awake; I think!
"Listen young man,
I have a story to tell you
It goes back many years
and you are not the first I've told
But few have listened
You have been granted the choice
to or not to."
But where was the voice coming from?
I looked too and fro
but didn't see a soul in sight
So I sat there content to listen
to what the old story was about.
"You need not worry young lad
your in good arms,
for I have many."
I sat somewhat puzzled
but intent on hearing the story
"As you have already guessed 
I'm old this you can be sure;
my story I have told countless times
to many young and old
There is a time coming they say
when it may be to late for never
to hear my story again
But you seem bright enough
to understand
You have learmed many things
I can tell by the look in your eyes
and now you will learn more
I grew from a young sap
learning much riches;
a storehouse full of wisdom to be sure.
Tell me young man;
have you ever watched a leaf fall to the ground
I mean really watched and listened?
Have you ever watched the clouds dance
to a many imagined shape?
Have you watched the blades of grass
stand at attention in the early morning dew?
Have you ever watched the rose
with its tantilizing beauty and fragrance
melt the strongest of beasts?
Have you ever watched the gentleness
of a butterfly land on a rain drop?
Have you ever watched the raging sea
smash off the rocks to smoothly go back
from once it came?
Have you ever watched the magnificent display
of the tiny ants gather to build their colony?
Have you heard the beautiful songs of the birds
singing to mother earth?
Do you know what a mountain says
to the sky?
Do you know how much dirt an earthworm eats
to replenish the ground for new growth?
Do you know how many rocks it takes
to see the beauty of one?
How many tears does it take the sky
to create a river for fish to swim?
How many forests need to be destroyed
before its beauty is seen?
Do the animals play at night to feel safe
from the beasts of the day?
A creation of an artificial world is what I can see,
an illusion of true beauty
which has always been here
before the beginning of time
This must stop
before it is all lost in forgotten memories
This is my story;
I have told you my story
of the wonders of creation
Now Go --------
Create youe own story
for all to hear
of the beauty that is here."
With those last words I heard
I stood up and hugged the old oak tree
and saw its true beauty
As I walked away thinking of what I heard,
I glanced back at that old oak tree
and it seemed as though a smile
formed on its face.

© 2018 RW Erskine


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RW Erskine
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have you ever watched a leaf fall to the ground
I mean really watched and listened?
Have you ever watched the clouds dance
to a many imagined shape?
Have you watched the blades of grass
stand at attention in the early morning dew?
Have you ever watched the rose
with its tantilizing beauty and fragrance
melt the strongest of beasts? i was honestly startled by this because I haven't really seen, really see those things, they are just what I usually pass by or ignore because it happens naturally, but reading your poem made me realize the value it gives, the message it tries to emit.. the beauty of nature is unique, have to appreciate and take care the best that you can. thanks it has been an eye-opener

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
RW Erskine

6 Years Ago

I know what you mean
sette

6 Years Ago

thanks for understanding



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A beautiful ode to a tree hugger! I love oak trees, which are the most prevalent trees around here. I love the way you start out in an intriguing way, we feel like we are hanging on every word, to find out what this tree may have to impart. To be truthful, the lead-in of the 6th stanza was a little too drawn out for me & I felt your message really started to sing when the questioning started. Amazing questioning! So much imagination in the way you word the questions as if to imply the answers, but still making the reader think. I love the way your poem seems to end on a melancholy note as if to be a warning about the way we are treating our planet. All in all, very imaginative & thought-provoking & artfully done! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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RW Erskine

6 Years Ago

You got the very jest of what I was saying, and the way I was unfolding it to the reader.
th.. read more
I really appreciate this, as I have often placed my hand on a tree and tried to hear it speak. Trees carry the scars and stories of this earth for us, if we are willing to understand, we can learn from them. My favorite line was "Do you know how much dirt an earthworm eats
to replenish the ground for new growth?
We are all interconnected.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RW Erskine

6 Years Ago

that we are my friend,
the trees will tell human kinds history,
thank you for your i.. read more
What a magnificent piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RW Erskine

6 Years Ago

thank you my friend
I will start by saying there are some obvious grammatical errors,
but when you feel the words,
I tend not to notice.

For me this is noticing the world around you,
and I mean the little things.

Have you ever watched the hummingbirds in the rain?
Drops forming on their feathers,
while they feed before an evening's sleep?
I love the flow of this,
and excuse me if part of the review sounds like an echo of your words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


RW Erskine

6 Years Ago

'obvious grammatical errors',
its free expression which follows no rules, nor does it live in.. read more
Jon Roggie

6 Years Ago

Write it like you want!
The technical stuff is a pain.
RW Erskine

6 Years Ago

of course I will,
technical stuff be damned
Wonderful and true words shared.
have you ever watched a leaf fall to the ground
I mean really watched and listened?
Have you ever watched the clouds dance
to a many imagined shape?
"Have you watched the blades of grass
stand at attention in the early morning dew?
Have you ever watched the rose
with its tantilizing beauty and fragrance
melt the strongest of beasts?"
Great wisdom in the above words. With youth. We were always running. In old age. We ensure we enjoy every seconds of the good days. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RW Erskine

6 Years Ago

this is true
thank you my friend,
always a pleasure to hear from you
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I enjoyed this one and you are welcome my friend.
Your story has a Native American feel to it
I like how you have presented your wise old tree.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RW Erskine

6 Years Ago

thank you Cherrie
Cherrie

6 Years Ago

Your welcome, I really enjoyed your story. You have captured my imagination with this tale
I’m in love with the trees description of such specific images in nature.

“Have you watched the blades of grass/ stand at attention in the early morning dew?”

I think these are my favorite lines, but I also like the part right after it,

“Have you ever watched the rose/ with its tantilizing beauty and fragrance/ melt the strongest of beasts?”

I would expect to get bored after so much description, but I enjoyed every part of it.

I thought the last stanza was good as it offered a somewhat strange image of a person hugging a tree(I can’t help but see the literal description of a “tree-hugger” here) and I think a strange image like that fits to further personify the tree...if that makes any sense.

I’ll admit that I think the speaker repeated that he wants to hear the story in the fifth stanza seemed a little redundant.
Also, although I think the word “story” doesn’t have to be used very literally, the trees description of the to-be-told “story” in the second stanza made me expect an actual narrative so I got thrown off by there not really being one.

That being said, I don’t really know what I’m talking about, and am a complete amateur in writing so don’t heed my critiques much.

I’m biased to trees in general so it being centered around a tree is enough to make me like the story, but I really did like the sentiment and the language you used.

I enjoyed the read!


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

RW Erskine

6 Years Ago

got you to think, and that was its point.
You got thrown off did you, kept you engaged and th.. read more
H L Rose

6 Years Ago

Of course! I loved reading it.

Not sure about hugged, but I’ve climbed them plenty.. read more
RW Erskine

6 Years Ago

that there is my friend, even just sitting under one
have you ever watched a leaf fall to the ground
I mean really watched and listened?
Have you ever watched the clouds dance
to a many imagined shape?
Have you watched the blades of grass
stand at attention in the early morning dew?
Have you ever watched the rose
with its tantilizing beauty and fragrance
melt the strongest of beasts? i was honestly startled by this because I haven't really seen, really see those things, they are just what I usually pass by or ignore because it happens naturally, but reading your poem made me realize the value it gives, the message it tries to emit.. the beauty of nature is unique, have to appreciate and take care the best that you can. thanks it has been an eye-opener

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
RW Erskine

6 Years Ago

I know what you mean
sette

6 Years Ago

thanks for understanding

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