Break Up

My feelings after my break up,, consider it true confessions

When you look me in the eyes,

When you say your last goodbyes,

I can feel my crystal heart,

shatter like a piece of glass,

Piercing through my hollow body,

I'm unable to say I'm sorry,

I try to beg for another chance,

But I can't move due to this trance,

Which seized my body and ripped my soul,

And burned my bones and killed me whole,

I close my eyes and feel you leave,

And seize my heart to make you believe,

That you're my love I told no lie,

You ignore my words and say goodbye.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Falling Leaf.]

A lovely yet sorrowful piece. You wrenched at my heart. There were lots of unnecessary commas, but still overall a beautiful piece. Well done, and welcome to the Cafe! It can be a little tough to settle in here, so if you ever need a piece reviewed I'm all ears and more than happy!

Wishing the best of luck,
Savannah

[Royce P. Hunt]

Thanks savannah :) and yes please!! I need all the help and support I can get. And I'll let you know if I need you with pleasure.