Halloween

m brother wrote this one when he was nine years old

 

 

                            HALLOWEEN

 

           Halloween is such a fright

           Scary people pop out at night

           Halloween gives you goose bumps

          So scary it will make you jump

          So beware of Halloween

          It's such a scary sceen.

Author's Note

my brother is the best

Reviews

[Ben]

This is good. I saw one spelling mistake though. 'sceen' should be scene. Very good!

[Becca*Type2012]

Again I like your rhyming. Whenever I try to rhyme it always turns out all wrong, so I like rhye I just can never do it. Again the color was amazing. It grabs my attention as soon as the page loads! Very nice work and I loved it!

[Nicole]

Hehe, I like how it rhyms. Good job.

-- Nicole PEACE, ♥, and :)