Cats

about cats

 

 

 

     Cats, Cats. Cats

      they always lay on mats

      the eat certin food

    depending on there mood

    they catch mice that are not nice

   they will bite and fight

    for there masters in return

     they will recive crackers

    they are good friends

     Cats are there to the end.

   

Author's Note

cats are my favorite animals

Reviews

[Ben]

Good rhyming. I saw some spelling mistakes though, that you might want to change. 'certin' should be spelled certain, and 'recive' should be receive. ' the' should be they, 'there' should be their. And I didn't quite understand this line though: 'they catch mice that are not nice'. Are you saying that the mice and not nice, or that their not nice to have around? Very good job, I liked it.

[Becca*Type2012]

Nice rhyming! I also like how you added color to the poem. It immedalely caught my attention as soon as the page loaded. Very nice!