universal romance

those stars
my how they fell
and tore
through my world
such a glorious decent
punctured
and bled the night sky
of one last gasp
truly a shame
when a star
makes its final journey
romancing the skyline
in its death dance
from the heavens

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A descriptive poem...Bravo......................

[Emily]

"truly a shame
when a star
makes its final journey
romancing the skyline
in its death dance
from the heavens"

The explanation of "death dance" here is amazingly beautiful and full of life - ironically! I truly adore how you have poetically explained and painted with words the journey a falling star makes to amaze us in it's death.