A Moment Can Last Forever

A Moment Can Last Forever

A Poem by RM Creswell
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Again, not really sure where this one cam from

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Those eyes, that stare

Those lips, that smile

Oh man, that feeling I get

He holds me close, I feel safe

I never want him to let go.

This very moment, I want it to last forever.

© 2009 RM Creswell


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Perfect and perfect. This is amazing! So sweet and simple. Brief yet knowable. Just like that hug you painted in my head. I can see it, I can feel it, and I can sense the closeness of the moment. So sincere and delicate.
Lovely. You wrote this so well~

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Liz
Another one I can REALLY relate to. And when I read this I had the same loving smile on my face.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on November 4, 2009

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RM Creswell
RM Creswell

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