When the mind is clear

When the mind is clear

A Poem by R.M.C

The sea is tranquil -
Not a ripple to be seen.
In this timeless spot
Truth! there is for me to glean, 
For life is still; minds are free. 

© 2016 R.M.C


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simple and direct -- with a little twist in the fourth line -- there is much to be learned when your mind is still -- wise words for a young one.

Posted 8 Years Ago


R.M.C

8 Years Ago

Thank you. And I agree that there is much to learn when your mind is still - but that is something t.. read more
Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

For most of us it is indeed tricky. Mind based meditation is a worthy pursuit in trying to achieve t.. read more
R.M.C

8 Years Ago

Yes, but I think in this day and age its harder than ever, what with the bustle and frenzy in most o.. read more
When the ocean is calm, it is so lovely to watch the sun dance on the clear water. Time stands still and the world becomes so clear. A serene write...lovely. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


R.M.C

8 Years Ago

Thank you Lydi. I'm glad I managed to convey my thoughts to you; I'm not used to trying to be so con.. read more
Lydia Shutter

8 Years Ago

Absolutely!

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R.M.C
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North-East England , United Kingdom



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