When

Another poem about my boyfriend Ryan.

 

When he calls or texts me

My heart skips a beat.

And I’m wonderin’ how he feels.

 

When I open the door

I see him smile.

And I’m wonderin’ what he’s thinkin’.

 

When we start into each other’s eyes

He closes in and kisses me.

And I’m wonderin’ if he’s feelin’ the sparks I’m feelin’.

 

When he has to leave

He walks out the door.

And I’m wonderin’ if he’s missin’ me like I’m missin’ him.

 

Author's Note

What did you think? Did it flow?

Reviews

[poetic-raven2012]

Beccaaaaaaaaa:]
Dun ask me why, because I have absolutely no idea why, but....this reads like a country song.
I'm serious.
But, but, but, I likes:]

[lawrence bear]

nice, good way to express your feelings. might want to make your words bigger, a little hard to read, but hey I'm getting old. lol, good write, keep it up.