THE FAULT IS NOT IN OUR STARS

its a simple poem about two lovers..

In the midst of sorrow,remember me

for I am hidden behind a cloud.

In the midst of pain embrace me,

for I am gracefully all above.

In the midst of betrayal,

search for me for I will be the 'one'.

When I look at you I am mesmerised

for you are covered in stardust.

when I hold you I am breathless,

for you are far above.

In this world I have no other choice but to say, 

my darling hear my plea.

Do not make the foolish mistake of thinking,

that you can hold the stars responsible,

Do not think you can fathom the depths of the skies.

But only this much my dear

that hidden deep behind the clouds ,

are the doors to heaven 

Author's Note

this is my first poem..so please bear with it...i have been inspired by the works of William shakesphere...from his play As you like it...its a wonderful play...and its one of my favourites.
Note: The line 'Do not think you can fathom the depths of the skies' has been directly taken from the works of William Shakespeare.' I do not intend to take any credit for it.

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

This is so good Ria, I can't believe it's your first poem and you're so young too.
I think you've created a fantastic piece of writing.

[Ria Carol]

Thank you...so much :)

[Ria Carol]

Thank you so much...im really glad that you liked it. :)

[Patricia Stephmore]

Very well written for a first poem Ria!!!
The title made me smile...of course..
You have what it takes to be a writer!!
Keep writing such beautiful poems!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

if you embrace me, you embrace my pain...and you assuage both....