Golden Neutral Life

Golden Neutral Life

A Poem by Gie Silva
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Mysterious life

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Beyond the dark of light,
Is a mysterious life
One sight of my eyes,
The world is mine

Everything's gone,
On one-on-one
Aiming for the life,
a better one

Truths and lies is,
Beyond that sight
And a golden hopes
with full of might

Life is like a,
love of life
A contemporary arts
With a modern and beautiful life

Known but unknown
Predictable but unpredictable
There's nothing wrong and right
Is this the world of life works?

© 2017 Gie Silva


Author's Note

Gie Silva
I tried my best

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I loved the tempo on this piece, and truly understood what you were talking about. I even could see within my mind, this world that you were seeing yourself. Congrats on writing this out, am not big on grammar my self, but at least I was able to get the feel of this, so great job, and keep on writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Galing naman this Boy hahaha

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved the tempo on this piece, and truly understood what you were talking about. I even could see within my mind, this world that you were seeing yourself. Congrats on writing this out, am not big on grammar my self, but at least I was able to get the feel of this, so great job, and keep on writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 23, 2017
Last Updated on July 27, 2017
Tags: contemporary

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Gie Silva
Gie Silva

Dumaguete City Negros Oriental, 7, Philippines



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