Lie, Lie, Lie

What is this? I wrote last year

Lie, Lie, Lie, Lie

All you do is lie as you lie between my thighs

Lie, Lie, Lie, Lie

All you do is lie as you stare me in the eyes

Lie, Lie, Lie, Lie

All you do is lie as you lie my down on the traintracks

Lie, Lie, Lie, Lie

All you do is lie as you line us up in the gas chambers

Lie, Lie, Lie, Lie

All you do is lie as your government lies through their teeth

Lie, Lie, Lie, Lie

All you do is lie as you light us up with gunfire

Lie, Lie, Lie, Lie

All you do is lie as you lie between my thighs

Reviews

[Cum hither]

Nice work especially the repetition, that gave it a good rhyme scheme.

[Kate Hunter]

nice job. it DOES make you wonder what the inspiration was...
Well done.

[Cassiopia Summers]

Interesting, I'd like to know one day what was the inspiration of this piece. Good write Love. (:

[Eternal.Dreamer]

interesting structure :) good writing.

[rhadamanthys]

haha dude i have a poem too about lies lol nice work man , and dude hope to see you after break , still haven't finished my drawing i think ms m is going to kill me lol well love the lie work especially between my thighs (:;,

[Nicaushio Yamaki]

Nice work

[Angela O.]

thought provoking to say the least :)

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Hmm...interesting- I'm alittle confused on where this is leading..