My Polyamorous Friend

Based on a song that i like. Real short and cheesy, wrote it when i was eleven

My polyamorous friend,

You got yourself in trouble again

My polyamorous friend,

I've caught you fooling around once again

My polyamorous friend,

Cheat on me again, and it will be the end of this

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

It's emotional and flows real well. I can feel the anger/disappointment in this and I'd definitely hate to be the reciever of this poem. Great write.

[Nicaushio Yamaki]

Nice

[Paradoxical]

I like the word choice and how it flows... The emotion is really great too.. nice job!

[Deviant Works]

Don't withstand the pain. There is someone who will love you more. Great poem and very impressive considering you were eleven.:) There was a lot of disappointment underlining your words.

[Hush Hush]

What does polyamorous mean? After you'll explain i'll probably get this poem....hehehehe >