Miles of love

Dedicated to my LillyRose

Over the internet

Seperated by miles and miles

Yet my love for you travels far

Online

Seperated from each others sight

Yet my wanting for you travels far

In a chatroom

Seperated from each others grasp

Yet our love is strong enough to make up for every mile

Reviews

[Jane Doe]

My version
Online together,
Seperated by miles and inches,
Yet my love for you travels far and wide,
Online but so true and so real,
Seperated from each others sight,
Yet my wanting for you travels far,
In a chatroom we can be found,
Seperated from each others grasp we are,
Yet our love is strong enough to make up for every mile and every inch every part of any street and any block.


I am sorrry I happen to notice all you need is a little grammar try.
100/100 though! :)

[Misty Blue Eyes]

i second what sarah said

[sarah]

internet relationships are hard to keep and a lot of people online aren't what they seem

[Morgan]

thats cute

[Deviant Works]

I like this because it is entirely true. Distance only makes the heart grow fonder and in these times many find love online. Chat rooms, dating services, even game and movie sites. Maybe even this site. Great "in the now" poem with a wonderful message attached.

[Ashley.M.E]

This is sweet